revision
Description Details Attached Files (2)
Discipline English Language
Assignment type : Essay
Description
Revised the two papers based off of the critiques and whatever else you see that needs to be fixed.
1.)You have some really good ideas here, but they are split between two terms–symbolism and conflict. You need to pick only one and discuss that in your essay. And how do we know the narrator is a he? That’s another argument you would need to defend. You must use he/she or the narrator. Watch the formatting of your Works Cited page–MLA.( Revison for Davaisha)
2.)Nice work. You really explore the significance of the importance of “air” in the song. Avoid the definitions of the terms. You do require a conclusion. ( Song2008)
Format MLA
Academic Level: –
Volume of 1 page (275 words)
Type of service: Custom writing
